Answer:
positive:
1/ avoid blaming language
2/ use words that create positive feelings
3/ be more confident
Please attach the excerpt! I'll be happy to help! :)
The most interesting moment was when I was born, it is mesmerizing. Though I cannot remember most parts since it was many many years ago, but I remember seeing a light and waking up. It felt like I was in heaven. I was confused at what was happening since I was a baby. I started crying not because I was scared but because I was happy to be born and out. They held me in their arms rocking me back and forth while I was intoxicated. The woman who held me was a pretty nurse trying to stop me from crying. I didn’t understand what was going on and only understood the part that this is my new home.
I hope this is good I tried ♀️
