Which option was used to revise this sentence? Dorian slept under the stars, and his dog lay beside him. As Dorian slept under
the stars, his dog lay beside him. A. added introductory words or phrases B. reversed the order of subject and verb C. moved parts of the sentence around D. changed to a question, exclamation, or command
In the revision of this sentence, the conjunction "and" was removed an introductory word was added: as, which is also subordinating conjunction whose function is to introduce the adverb clause "As Dorian slept under the stars" and connect it to the other clause. This type of revision is often done to give the piece of writing a more natural flow when reading and to convey ideas more clearly.
Dorian slept under the stars, and his dog lay beside him. As Dorian slept under the stars, his dog lay beside him. A. added introductory words or phrases B. reversed the order of subject and verb C. moved parts of the sentence around D. changed to a question, exclamation, or command
