You did not provide the remaining sentences, but the first sentence provided The coast of Florida is home to many unique sea creatures like the manatee does not need revision for redundancies because it is correct.
The last two didn't have any change. But most of this sounds good! I wouldn't mention you get angry at people to your employer, though!
If you need more help, private message me! I would be more than happy to help you with those irregular verbs! <3
The correct answer to this open question is the following.
Although you forgot to include the main point 1 as a reference, we can help you with the following comment.
"How do we engage with others while staying true to ourselves?"
The best to do so is to genuinely be ourselves, truly knowing ourselves after reflecting who we are, what we aspire, what are our strengths, and weaknesses. If we know what our belief system is and why, we won't have any problem in relating to other people, although they have different belief systems and approaches to life.
We can respectfully disagree with other people's ideas and show tolerance for the way other people think.
He thinks he is better than other animals