<u>Bolding verbs and underlining+bolding vague ones</u>
Anthony is taking Denise for a ride in his new car. He <u>moves</u> fast down the highway. Suddenly Denise <u>says</u>, “Look out!” A truck <u>moves</u> into their lane, right in front of them. Anthony <u>puts</u> his foot on the brake-hard. The car <u>goes</u> first to the right, then to the left. “Don’t use the brake!” Denise says. Anthony takes his foot off the brake and <u>gets</u> control of the car. “We’re safe,” Anthony <u>goes</u> to Denise.
<u>Rewrite:</u>
Anthony is taking Denise out for a ride in his new car. He drives fast down the highway. Suddenly Denise screams, “Look out!” A truck shifts into their lane, right in front of them. Anthony slams his foot on the brake; hard. The car swerves first to the right, then to the left. “Don’t use the brake!” Denise shouts. Anthony takes his foot off the brake and regains control of the car. “We’re safe,” Anthony says to Denise
I remember this from fifth grade. We were learning like the kids at Ron Clark Academy, its Reducing Information!
Can u clarify what person ur talking about and from what text
I confused is there a list of choices you can choose from or is it that you can you put anything that makes sense