1answer.
Ask question
Login Signup
Ask question
All categories
  • English
  • Mathematics
  • Social Studies
  • Business
  • History
  • Health
  • Geography
  • Biology
  • Physics
  • Chemistry
  • Computers and Technology
  • Arts
  • World Languages
  • Spanish
  • French
  • German
  • Advanced Placement (AP)
  • SAT
  • Medicine
  • Law
  • Engineering
mestny [16]
3 years ago
15

Now that you've spotted the problems of shift of person and shift of number, revise the paragraph by removing these inconsistenc

ies. Rewrite the paragraph, maintaining consistency by using first person plural when referring to the readers, and third person plural nouns and pronouns in referring to those being judged. In the story, "The Valiant Woman" by J. J. Powers, we find that in judging people we overlook most of the characteristics that draw us to him, but we do so without realizing it. You can draw inaccurate conclusions about a person by misjudging their facial expressions, their physical stamina, and their obvious personality traits. When people are blinded by false superiority, they judge a person incorrectly because they fail to see them as they really are.
English
1 answer:
Tamiku [17]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

Paragraph rewritten with consistency: " In the story, "The Valiant Woman" by J. J. Powers, we find that in judging people we overlook most of the characteristics that draw us to him (them), but we do so without realizing it. You (we) can draw inaccurate conclusions about a person by misjudging their facial expressions, their physical stamina, and their obvious personality traits. When people (we) are blinded by false superiority, they (we) judge a person incorrectly because they (we) fail to see them as they really are."

Explanation:

To generate consistency in the above passage, you must keep the message linked to a single narrative, keeping pronouns fixed to something or someone. For this it is necessary that you when speaking with readers always use the pronouns "we", "us", while, when referring to the people being judged, always use the pronouns "they" and "them". In this way the passage will show consistency, as shown above.

You might be interested in
I have described myself as always having been imbued with a fervent longing to penetrate the secrets of nature.
Tpy6a [65]
I have described myself as always having been imbued with a fervent longing to penetrate the secrets of nature.

In this line, the author is exploring man versus nature. The word or phrase from this passage that best demonstrated the conflict between man and nature is perhaps ‘penetrate’ or specifically ‘penetrate the secrets of nature’.

‘Penetrate’ means to succeed in forcing a way into or through. This signifies that the persona in this passage wants to understand the mysteries that surround nature.



5 0
3 years ago
You work for a local snack manufacturing and distribution company and have been asked to assist in the data collection process f
alexgriva [62]

Answer:

A-Secondary data,

B-Primary data,

C-Primary data,

D-Secondary data,

E-Secondary data,

F-Primary data

Explanation:

Secondary data:- is data which has been collected by individuals or agencies for purposes other than those of our particular research study.

Primary data:- is data collected by a researcher from first hand sources, using methods like surveys, interviews and experiments. It is collected with the research project in mind directly from primary sources

8 0
3 years ago
How much does context matter<br>when expressing an idea in literature?<br>​
nataly862011 [7]

Answer:

A lot!

Explanation:

It means so much, because you do not want to have a reader who is flipping through the pages of a story without knowledge of what is happening! Would you like to read a book that had random events happening all of the time with no explanation?

6 0
3 years ago
PLZ HURRY IT'S URGENT!!!!
Sonbull [250]

The answer is B. I read this in English class, and we talked about it. Realizing the her husband marked the paper is just before the climax. The other 2 are events leading up to the climax. The stoning is the climax of The Lottery. Also, I liked that story.

6 0
3 years ago
Which statement best describes the author’s purpose?
Ivahew [28]

Answer:

The author's purpose is what the author wanted to tell the reader or make the reader feel while reading the author's story. In other words, its the authors intent behind writing the story.

8 0
3 years ago
Other questions:
  • Can you please help me with number 1. And 2. You have to read the story and figure out what graphic organizer it goes into thank
    7·1 answer
  • What is transamination?
    7·2 answers
  • At first, Sari was disappointed that she was put in a different group than Sarah and Cameron, her two best friends. She realized
    14·2 answers
  • Select the word that is correctly spelled. stuning stunning
    9·2 answers
  • In organizing the events of Odysseus’s quest, why would the text in The Odyssey - Elpenor be labeled as part of the road of tria
    11·2 answers
  • Which sentence is correct?
    6·2 answers
  • If an advertisement is affiliated with a website's content, what might that suggest?
    7·1 answer
  • Think about one of your favorite books, movies, or TV shows. Who is a character in the story that has a job that you think is in
    12·2 answers
  • LANGUAGE QUESTION I AM SO CONFUSED
    7·1 answer
  • What is the best resolution for the narrative?
    12·1 answer
Add answer
Login
Not registered? Fast signup
Signup
Login Signup
Ask question!