For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
Answer:
The study of literature is important because it, at its most basic, improves reading skills. From this involved reading of quality literature, a student then develops their writing skills, as the two go hand in hand (the best writers are avid readers, typically).
Explanation:
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A political gathering of white people against black people, and they are a of people <span />
He is from Atlanta, Georgia
