I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.
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No I would say that neither are good but Jones at least didn't use whips or stuff like that. Napoleon tried stealing ideas from other people and killed lots of animals.
I hope this helped a little.
C. Narrative has a plot, character and setting.
Think of a movie with Morgan Freeman, in the beginning when he Narrates he is describing the setting, plot, and sometimes characters.
