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Mahatma Gandhi Rd, Andheri West Mumbai. June 5th, 2020.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Priya Thomas from Mumbai and I am writing this letter to make my voice and the voice of all the citizens of Mumbai heard.
It is public knowledge that it is hard to get to our jobs or destinations due to the frequent traffic jams that the city experiences. During the last years, there was an increase in the number of cars, which lead to a collapsed traffic system since its roads are small for the number of cars. Besides, they are poorly marked as regards street signals, stop lights, and crosswalks. All these things make the driving and the fluency of the traffic harder and harder with the constantly increasing number of vehicles.
It would be helpful if you can publish this letter in the newspaper or write an article about this problem to reach the governor's attention and help us.
Yours faithfully,
Priya Thomas.
Explanation:
The letter aims to inform and persuade the editor of The Times Of India to help you, to do this you should write a formal letter explaining the problem and asking kindly for help. It is important to give detailed information about the problem. In other words, you should inform about the problem and explain the consequences that it has on the city to convince the editor to help you.
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