Question

Read the paragraph from a personal narrative. 1. I remember when Ben first had the idea for a community garden. 2. We were walking home from school past an old abandoned dirt lot. 3. Ben stood and stared through the fence for awhile lost in thought. 4. I thought he was acting strangely. 5. I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel. Which is the best revision of sentence 5? We were walking by the dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel. The following Saturday, I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel. I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there was he digging up the dirt with a shovel. Finally, I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel.

Answer 1

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I believe the answer is - "The following Saturday, I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt lot with a shovel."

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Answer 2

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a time relationship to show the connection between events more clearly

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