For alliteration= Ally ambitiously paid for all the apples, although she admired Amy's radio of all things.
Your expectations to reveal a certain clue in a short amount of time is not realistic.
I think that coverage so destined be in disguise cause 3+7 is equal to 6
I think you should say “she accepted her invitation” instead of request. Maybe a little more background story? Unless you’re gonna make it into like a detective story where the short story makes a bigger picture. Maybe instead of her getting lost so soon, she meets up a friend, they both get lost, eventually meet the clown. You did great I like it so far, but its the little details that add that pizzaz. Ex: At that moment Samantha had realized her mistake, as she spent the time trick or treating the sky grew dark and ominous, a feeling like she had never felt before, true fear.
A. Modeling
or being a good role model
