what are the senteces and i can help you for sure
Believe in yourself. Know your rights. Decide what you want, Get the facts. Planning strategy. Gather support. Target efforts. Express yourself clearly. Assert yourself clearly. Be firm and persistent. Here's a list of 10 examples.
"With" or "together" "along with"
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Explanation:
Its pretty good, I would reccommend that you should change
"The echoes of demise reverberate throughout my ears." to "The echoes of demise reverberate in my ears."
"I have slash open my enemies, " to "I slash open my enemies"
"The scarlet hue of their corpses bows before me, " to "the scarlet hue of their corpses bow before me"
"But darkness’s claw clutches hold of my eyes, " to "But darkness’ claw clutches my eyes, "
"The coldness of the steel penetrates my muscles," to "The steel's coldness penetrates my muscles,"
also I don't really know what the And line is for.
