it sounds more like bates motel
Answer: Your essay sounds pretty great! The only thing that I would change is that in essays such as these evidence to support your claim should come after your claim. For example you might start your third paragraph with something like " Another reason I think I would be suitable for this position is that I can give current relevant advice," and then add in your supporting claim of why you can give relevant advice. This simply just makes your claims sound stronger and your more likely to get a higher grade but overall a great essay!
Hope this helps!
Explanation:
I believe the correct answer is piers and flying
buttresses.
Builders of Gothic cathedrals reinforced the walls
of their architecture from the outside with piers (such as bridges or arcs) and
flying buttresses (a type of buttress which is composed of an arched structure
that extends from the upper portion of a wall to a pier) in order to provide
the lateral support.
Eric Hosking was the first.
