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thanks am trying to pull up my grade this the last day
Ar = unstressed
rived = stressed
"in the snow *was one of.."
"offers more *then a time for *children to have fun.."
"to do in the winter now and it's unfortunate.."
"..find the wintertime unpleasant"
"should *go outside and enjoy.."
"I am glad I grew up where it snows"
I recommend these changes as well as limiting the number of times you say snow and replace it with a different word, as well as using more descriptive adjectives
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Explanation:
O "Ah, the good soup! I don't know anything better than that."
"Everyone wants to go, it is very select, and they are not giving many invitations to clerks."