Question

Would someone help me rewriting these sentences correctly. Thank you.

Answer 1

There are several different ways to rewrite each sentence, but I'll just rewrite them two ways each.

Question 8.

• She took a dip in the ocean occasionally, since the water looked green and cool.
• The water looked green and cool, so she took a dip in the ocean occasionally.

Question 9.

• Everybody seemed to take it easy down South. What a wonderful winter vacation that was! (Only sentences I could think of)

Question 10.

• The memory of the trip lingered on when she went back to school the next day.
• When she went back to school the next day, the memory of the trip lingered on.