Paragraph 1, since it says "I can't believe this storm" and "we're stuck on the couch!" Which indicates that setting that the whole story is in, not including where they actually go.
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It sounds like Nantai doesn't want anything to do with his old culture, and he wants to become just like the modern white men. He is very attached to the ways of them.
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you need to add some commas and you need to add "the" in front of reader
The second sentence doesn't make sense.
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I would suggest using Grammarly and proof reading your work at least 3 times out loud.
