If you want a good story that people would enjoy, dialogue should be like a real conversation.
Answer:
1. Do we have to buy our own books at school?
2. Does he have to work until 7:30p.m.?
3. Do my friends have to go home before I do?
4. Does my sister have to study French at her school?
I would want a rewind button to go back and fix every mistake so my family can stop hating me and I can actually make them feel proud of me instead of them always being mad at me