Answer: why Annie made the changes she did
Explanation:
The first sentence stated that "Finally, on June 25, 1894, she was off". The sentence along with the second sentence doesn't give information regarding the reason for Annie made the changes that she made.
The sentence three stated that "It had taken her three months to travel approximately 1,300 miles, and she had more than 20,000 miles left to cover".
Without the writer not including the statistic in sentence 3, it'll have been unclear why Annie made the changes she did.
Answer: As the men marvel over it, Carlson offers to kill the dog quickly by shooting it in the back of the head. Reluctantly, Candy gives in. Carlson takes the dog outside, promising Slim that he will bury the corpse
Explanation: :)
Answer:
Put a period after: later on got called "The Shot".
Where you say "Another reason is if your watching" - the your is you're
Get rid of "could" in your last sentence. it will make you seem more confident.
Explanation:
It looks good otherwise!
