This paragraph is super... choppy. It needs to be more fluid. Also, the hook is, well, not present. They have a good start with "Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories." You should build more on this idea of why gardening makes you happy. Through these memories you could share what you gain from gardening, and why you should stop thinking just about the time it takes but also the profit you can earn. To get rid of this "choppiness" you connect through the memories.
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D, a caused-and-effect text structure is used to explain why immigrants could be detained at the hospital complex
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But, my mouth was a sandy desert.
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Not sure if there is another metaphor? is this the whole paragraph?
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I'm sorry, is there a question or ?
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