I was confused about this question but i made this
Answer:
== == "English grammer active and passive voice change from active to passive .
Explanation:
The main method for the organization of ideas from the passage in chronological order.
<u>Explanation:</u>
- The idea organization consists of 5 steps they are topical or logical pattern, chronological pattern, spatial pattern, problem-solution followed by the cause or casual and effect pattern.
- The Chronology pattern is a time-based activity in which we have to order the points
- It gives the events of the stories with a timeline that can give us a clear picture of the passage. But it can be at the beginning, middle or even at the end too.
For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
