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One way to organize information effectively is to write it out into an essay or a paragraph. This way, the information is not simply scattered around, but put into a neat text.
Another way to organize information effectively is to display it through a slideshow or powerpoint. The various information can be organized by slides.
I prefer organizing information into slideshows because I find it more interesting, as well as easier for me to navigate. For instance, each slide may contain its own definitions and information based on category. However, in an written response, one would need to create a lot of indentations and paragraphs, even if the fact is only a sentence long. Meanwhile, in a powerpoint, each slide would contain a fact and the presentation would not look nearly as messy. Additionally, during a presentation, powerpoints are simply more appealing to the audience, rather than a "read - off" off the paper.
<span>My suggestions are in bold.
"Even since the beginning of it all, America has never truly been one."
</span><span>Change even to ever.
</span><span>"While slavery does not any longer pertains to today’s society, the obstacle of ostracism is still prominent. All the time stories of racial police shootings are in the news. Ostracism, or exclusion, is another concerning problem facing the country."
<span>You introduced us to ostracism more than once. An introduction of an key point should not be repeated.</span><span>
"</span></span>All the time stories of racial police shootings are in the news."
It sounds awkward and seems grammatically incorrect. Revise this sentence.
"<span>The purpose many have in mind when they come to the country, freedom of religion results in thousands of different practices of religion with many different views and beliefs."
</span><span>Add a comma after "freedom of religion."
</span><span>"The people of America also have many different beliefs because of their plentiful diversity and backgrounds."
Plentiful is describing diversity. I'm not sure if this is correct or not, but, just to be safe, consider changing "plentiful diversity and backgrounds" to "variety of backgrounds."</span>
Failing to accurately cite even a single source "<span>a. can result in accusations of plagiarism" since even if this is not your intention, it is very hard to prove it when being examined. </span>
They all look good to me. All of your answers is what I would have chosen. :)
Hello User,
One of the most important ingredients for suspense is to 'let the audience play God'. By this he means to let the audience know everything that is going to happen so that they can predict the fate of the characters.
