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kaheart [24]
3 years ago
7

This is a Spanish story that I am writing. Could anyone tell me if anything sounds unnatural and what specifically to fix?

Spanish
1 answer:
Anettt [7]3 years ago
8 0

Answer:

the "y yo realmente confio en tus servicios para esto" is forced.  Instead take out "y yo realmente...esto incluye tu tambien" and try  "necesito poder confiar en tus servicios, por que si discubro que me defraudes como el ultimo conductor, voy a dejar una mala critica para tu empresa.  Ademas me asegure que te afecte a ti."

"tu ya lo sabes"*

"Estare alli en cinco minutos mas o menos"*

"Ven rapido, que si no, asumiras la consecuencias."*

"El conductor murmuro un par de palabras incomprensibles y colgo la llamada."*

"mientras veia que el trafico de Avenida 185 se movia a la velocidad de una tortuga"*

"Al final el conductor nunca aparecio y Margarita dejo criticas de una estrella en cada conductor de esa empresa.  Decidio irse caminando a su trabajo y mientras tanto penso en cosas que solo ella les encontraba sentido."*

"pero ya no eran mejores amigos"*

"pasos que se acercaban a su oficina"*

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