Sanger Rainsford is the main character in the most dangerous game I believe.
Explanation:
a character who undergoes scientific internal change throughout the course of a story the development of a dynamic characters often step total and unstated and is not due to a change of a character circumstances
This is not always true. Planned action such as a premeditated murder has a negative consequence. While, on the other hand, a planned action such as doing your homework first thing when you get home, can have a positive consequence such as having more free time to do what you wish.
Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm Box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the Chicago fire of 1871.
This is the best example of adding concrete details. It specifically says which alarm box Schaffer told his assistant. The original sentence makes it seem as the miscommunication was the big problem. While it was a problem, the fact that the firefighters went to the incorrect location is really the reason the Chicago fire of 1871 was so devastating. Including these details makes the writing much clearer and easier for the reader to follow.
