Question

Can someone proofread this and tell me if I need to add any grammar or punctuation errors or spelling errors?

Answer 1

Sorry this is for points

Answer 2

Answer:

First of all, love your profile picture.

Yes, The lithosphere and biosphere did interact during this event. First,

Add spaces after commas

snow,ice,and several entire glaciers melted causing mudslides up to 50

         too many words, try "this is devastating"

miles. This is extremely terrible because people can not live in things buried

in mud nor can they survive in a town full of mud. Second, The forest was

reduced to wastelands. thousands of animals were killed and 57 people

died. This can become a problem because with animals being killed we can

                                                       *Factories*                                     *Dying*

not get food to supply markets or factroys with meat and with people dieing

the population will decrease. Third, Areas that received a very thin layer of

ash gained an increase of crop production. Now this doesn't really sound

bad, that's not the case it was actually good because we need crops for

food and with more crops they could supply to people that needed food or

                                                      *Lastly*

that were affected by this event. Lassly, This proves that the Lithosphere

                       *Do in fact*

and biosphere di infact interact with each other.

Hope this helps :))