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meriva
4 years ago
10

Read the excerpt from a student’s essay.

English
1 answer:
vladimir2022 [97]4 years ago
5 0

The best revision of the concluding sentence is, Planning for the Grove City Music Festival will encourage the band to practice and work together.

Answer: Option D.

Explanation:

The concluding sentence of any paragraph is its closure. It is basically the a sentence which summarize the argument. The above mentioned excerpt is about the Grove City Mangrove Festival, the concluding sentence provided in the excerpt is quite informal and doesn't have much effect.

So if we have to revise the concluding sentence, then it would most certainly be this, 'Planning for the Grove City Music Festival will encourage the band to practice and work together.' We can see that this sentence explains in a logical way about the benefits of attaining the music festival. Sentences which makes use of logos are easily understood and helps in influencing people.

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