The biggest issue with this is that the first sentence is run-on, you should consider breaking it into smaller sentences, maybe by getting rid of the "and" after describing the mother, replacing it with a period and letting the father get a sentence of his own. Also, you could try "-on how happy the Railway family is. The story also uses detail on how nice the parents are-" something along those lines, just to break the run-on sentence?
This is minor, but at the end "creates a sense of perfection, by describing their house-" the comma before by isn't necessary, and can either be deleted, or you can rephrase like "a sense of perfection. The story does this by describing-"
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There brought about forest fires, house fires, arson, Molotov s and flamethrowers
Which all are used to harm others
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What book or story is this?
<span>A personal career profile form evaluates two sets of data, personal information and career information. The correct answer is A. This type of profile form enlists your personal information, such as when you were born, which schools you attended, etc., as well as your career information, such as your previous jobs and work experience, etc.Hope I helped! :) Cheers!</span>
Answer:
A
Explanation:
Why the others are incorrect:
B: The comma isn't really introducing anything, it's just breaking the sentence up from the speaker.
C: There isn't any need for a comma between beginning and with
D: There isn't any need for the commna between are and math.beginning
