It is really a great story so far. What you need to do next is to write what did Ryker and Noelle do when they heard the footsteps above them. Did they investigate or did they leave the house? Since Ryker had already told Noelle that his brother was going to try and murder her, I don't think you should send them directly upstairs to see what or who made the footsteps. You should let the story continue a little more to be more dramatic. Don't let the story be a cliche like others would do. Perhaps, they could hide and wait to see who comes down. They could also catch the brother and then call the police or even the parents. You want the story to be different and have more excite to make the reader be wowed in the end.
Answer:
me i would rember th moves and the faces
Explanation:
Um I think you swapped B and C around but it would be COMPONENTS OF A HOUSE. A house has many things in it and need to have certain things in it to stand up. Like in some cases there needs to be support. In others it can support itself.
Answer:
D. used and understood in other words.
Explanation:
Example: pre.
Precooked.
Prefix.
Precipitation.
Portable parts of words are suffixes and prefixes.
