Once upon a time there was man, he liked eating lollipops and riding unicorns, his friends though, made fun of him. This caused him to have no friends except the "imaginary" ones of course. So his so-called friends inspired him to become an explorer, and while the unicorns he used to ride were obviously not real, he one day found a real one!!! his discovery made him millions and he was heard of throughout the world and lived happily ever after. THE END
Answer:
In order to write a successful thesis statement: Avoid burying a great thesis statement in the middle of a paragraph or late in the paper. Be as clear and as specific as possible; avoid vague words. Indicate the point of your paper but avoid sentence structures like, “The point of my paper is…”
Explanation:
The Thesis. Statement. The thesis statement is that sentence or two in your text that contains the focus of your essay and tells your reader what the essay is going to be about.
