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Hi, I’m Soccerfina and I am a goddess from Olympus. I am the goddess of soccer. I want to go down to Earth to help this kid that is getting bullied because he is the only one in his village that doesn't know how to play soccer and also because I want to find my true self and why I exist. I’m trying to find my purpose as a goddess. So I convinced Zeus to let me help this little kid out. Zeus says that I can stay on Earth for 6 months to teach the little kid how to play soccer and to find my purpose as a Goddess. I agreed and Zeus sent me down to Earth. When I arrived at Earth I went to the nearest soccer field because that's where I do all my important thinking.
While I was thinking about my existence I started thinking about how pretty I was. I had beautiful blonde short hair, I am 5”3 and I always wear my soccer uniform. The uniform is white with a red stripe on the right side of her shirt and shorts. I’s eyes are light blue like the ocean at midnight on a full moon. I represent all types of soccer. My symbols are a person holding a soccer ball and a soccer trophy. I am represented by these objects because it shows how determined she is to win and also shows the world how good she is at soccer. I’s powers are playing any position and she can score from anywhere on the field. She also has the ability to control any soccer game in the world. I could be in Russia and just thinking about a random soccer game, then I can change the way that team plays, scores and how competitive they act.
I have many traits but I will only tell you a few, energetic because I am always wanting to play soccer with other gods/goddesses, childish (because I always want to play.), and have good sportsmanship because although I don't like to lose I still respect the opponent and show care. I live on Mount Olympus, but I can always be found at a soccer field. I chose this place because it's where I do what I love most, soccer. I might be associated with Nike, the god of fitness because we both love and live for fitness. For fun obviously, I will play soccer. When I relax, I will juggle a soccer ball around to see if I can beat my high score of 5 hours.

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Looks great! I would find a few grammer problems but you can just copy and paste your essay into a grammer checker and it will fix it for you. But other than that, it looks spectacular. Refresh my memory about what you need for your final paragraph?