I think that was a good passage but maybe you should add some other struggles about being away from your family.
The Texas white primary system was found unconstitutional by the Supreme Court, which decided 8–1. In that decision, the Supreme Court found that a state legislation passed in Texas in 1923 was unconstitutional because it allowed the state Democratic Party to discriminate racially. Most Southern states ended their selectively inclusive white primaries as a result of the case.
The Articles of Confederation was our first plan of government after the Revolutionary War. One success this plan of government had was in how it dealt with the organization and the sale of western lands. The Land Ordinance of 1785 was an excellent law that allowed for an orderly process to deal with lands in the West.
What do you mean the sounds of words in Malay? Please do not speak Malay so people can understand better.