He must've sinned a whole lot!!
I think it's a because every word has a subject and a verb
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(1) the time traveller explores the wells and finds a complex network of undeground tunnels.(2) the traveller encounters the sub morlocks(3) the traveller realizes people of the future belong to two different races called "eloi and morlocks."(4) the traveller finds his machine missing(5) traveller saves weena from drowning(6) the travller realizes the morlocks have his machine.
Conventions are not an evaluative tool for a writer to use during the revision process.
