Question

When Joanne began editing her narrative, she decided to move sentence 7. Where is the BEST place for Joanne to move sentence 7?

Answer 1

Answer:

The answer is: letter B, after sentence 1 because Joanne is describing her entire trip.

Explanation:

Joanne is narrating her trip upon visiting her aunt and uncle in Valencia, Spain. The way the story flows, it seems like Joanne had a great time during her visit. So, this means that her entire trip experience was incredible.

Sentence 7 (The experience was incredible.) should be placed after sentence 1 because Joanne is trying to tell the reader that her experience was, indeed, incredible. After stating it, she goes on telling the details one after the other.

Putting the sentence in-between would divide the thought of the narration. If you put the sentence after 4, 5 or 8, it would feel indifferent to all the other sentences because everything she's written is a positive experience for her. Thus, everything she experienced is incredible.

Putting it after sentence 1 is the best way to reveal her thoughts.

Thus, this explains the answer.