first you will need to know how to transition going into transitions is very important and to do that i would suggest using your transition words such as
as, however, whatsoever, subsequently, soon
these are great transition words for changing the focus because you must know how to transition.
1. My brother and I are reading a storybook our mom gifted us on Christmas Day.
2. Adam does not feel like cycling this evening, he is running instead.
3. Liam is eating his favourite dish cooked by his beloved mother.
4. Leah and Lewis are rehearsing a dance for their performance this weekend.
A. The huge white van full of holiday packages for everyone came down the street, is the correct way to rewrite the following fragment.
As compared with other sentences, this sentence makes the appropriate use of preposition 'down' followed by the noun, which clarifies the sentence precisely.
In the other sentences B. The huge white van full of holiday packages for everyone rumbling and backfiring. C. The huge white van full of holiday packages for everyone on our whole block. D. The huge white van full of holiday packages for everyone in time for Christmas; does not frame the proper sentences as it joins the sentences abruptly without any direction specification.
she was at the beach
she wore this white dress
with a red a blue flower
with a hat
and was really pretty
and you
you were happy
and then there was a sunset
the end
