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Identify the dangling modifier in the sentences.
Attacked by the school bully, the backpack fell from Abner’s shoulder.
A dangling modifier is a modifier that has nothing to modify. Abner was attacked by the school bully, not the backpack as the sentence suggests because of this error. In other words, we have here a dangling modifier or misplaced modifier (Attacked by the school bully).
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I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.
Conflict provides crucial tension in any story and is used to drive the narrative forward. It is often used to reveal a deeper meaning in a narrative while highlighting characters' motivations, values, and weaknesses.