Answer:
Add clear and logical transitions between ideas and replace words and phrases with other that are more concrete
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"Once we went to this carnival with rollercoasters and all sorts of fun attractions to see. It was our first time and we were very excited. We thought of taking our kids there all the time. We had a great time there. One of our best memeroies"
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indirect = Oh no! The purse was lost
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