I think irving did a great job in creating suspense for that story.
I remember clearly the part when the character felt an eerie gazed in his bedroom and keep hearing unrecognized moan. That part is well written and will send chills to most of its reader's spine
drums make a bom bom sound and giving that description to the heart makes it seem like it is pounding very fast and it usually does that when you are nervous or you just finished working out