Read the excerpt from Paolo’s personal narrative, “The Amusement Park.” The first time I rode a roller coaster, I was nine years
old. I remember feeling both terrified and excited. I had goosebumps, and the hairs on my arms were standing straight up. My sister and I waited in line for an hour, which only made me more nervous. Which sentence is the best example of a vivid sensory detail? “The first time I rode a roller coaster, I was nine years old.” “I remember feeling both terrified and excited.” “I had goosebumps, and the hairs on my arms were standing straight up.” “My sister and I waited in line for an hour, which only made me more nervous.”
