What is the questions and yes I have read the story. I'm just confused on what you are asking.
A. The commas are needed between their names as they are separating different clauses. <span />
Figurative language is the use of words in an unusual or imaginative manner. Such as metaphors, hyperboles, similes, etc
You didn’t even capitalize Make what is wrong with you you freak
Answer:
The writer has organized the content using the block method.
Explanation: