Question

The cake is made with Belgian chocolate, butter, and a touch of cinnamon.That's what makes it my favorite. (the writer likes the cake because it hs cinnamon in it) how can i fixed the vague

Answer 1

What do you mean fix the 'vague' if you're listing something you say this“ cake consisted of Belgian chocolate, butter and cinnamon. I knew the writer would like the cake because it had cinnamon. his favorite"