It explicitly describes the water at night<span />
Sternly, maybe could just be grim ( formiadable, harsh, uninviting, depressing, lack of humor, etc)
What play is this about??
This paragraph lacks sentence variety because the writer, started sentence after sentence the <em>same way</em>. didn't include structure with proper legth or that provides emphasis. <em>Prepositional phrase, adverbial clause, adverbs</em> (absolutely; naturally) or some<em> connective</em> (therefore; and; besides etc) are great help to <em>avoid monotony.</em>
Difficult—> complex
Think—> realize
Big—> prominent
Make—> manufacture
