Question:
The role of women in the world
Answer:
-------------------------------
The role of a women in the world is to teach children and cater to them. they are mostly the elders and leaders in familys.
There is so a sterotype that women are here to cook and clean and also watch the kids. but it isn't true out of my perspective, so people that say that are most likely sexist; but thats just from my perspective once again.
Answer:
It's a parent's responsibility to protect his/her life. Abby's family thinks that she was capable of making the trip.
Explanation:
<u>Bolding verbs and underlining+bolding vague ones</u>
Anthony is taking Denise for a ride in his new car. He <u>moves</u> fast down the highway. Suddenly Denise <u>says</u>, “Look out!” A truck <u>moves</u> into their lane, right in front of them. Anthony <u>puts</u> his foot on the brake-hard. The car <u>goes</u> first to the right, then to the left. “Don’t use the brake!” Denise says. Anthony takes his foot off the brake and <u>gets</u> control of the car. “We’re safe,” Anthony <u>goes</u> to Denise.
<u>Rewrite:</u>
Anthony is taking Denise out for a ride in his new car. He drives fast down the highway. Suddenly Denise screams, “Look out!” A truck shifts into their lane, right in front of them. Anthony slams his foot on the brake; hard. The car swerves first to the right, then to the left. “Don’t use the brake!” Denise shouts. Anthony takes his foot off the brake and regains control of the car. “We’re safe,” Anthony says to Denise
Answer:
Charlie trudged through the mud. His feet were as heavy as cinderblocks as he tried to pull them up through the mud. He began to panic as his feet stuck in the mud and slowly started to sink. A boom as loud as thunder sounded from behind him. Whipping his head around, he saw a figure as dark as the night around him. The fog seemed to blanket the cloak the figure was wearing. Charlie tried to scream but his mouth was as dry as chalk. The last thing Charlie saw was the figure swoop down on him before he woke up in a cold sweat. It was simply a bad dream!
Explanation: