Read the paragraph from Kevin’s personal narrative. 1. When I was in fifth grade, my family became interested in fostering kitte
ns from the local animal shelter. 2. First, we had to fill out an application. 3. Next, we had to attend a workshop on caring for kittens properly. 4. A woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens. 5. Finally, we were approved. 6. That was an exciting day! Which is the best revision of sentence 4? After that, a woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens. She came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens. Finally, a woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens. I came our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens.
Explanation: The other sentences say 2.First 3.Next 5.Finally
Answer C says finally but sentence 5 already says that and answer D says I came our house etc. and that sentence start off does not make any sense and answer B says She came to out house. This sentence does not have the right start off Because it doesn’t have one