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never [62]
3 years ago
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What is one of the best ways to improve sentence flow in an essay?

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pychu [463]3 years ago
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Answer:

Explanation: give more detail to what you are talking about.

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Evidence requires research. You can look up "drinking and driving" and go to a trustworthy website.  For example: "According to the University of Maryland Medical System (<u>source)</u>, you should "cover both your nose and mouth." <u>(quote)</u>

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When you search for evidence, you usually look for facts and quotes that work well for your claim, the thing you're trying to prove. But, you should also search for things that don't go well with your claim, which is the counterclaim. Then, you think of a rebuttal. A rebuttal is a counterclaim to the counterclaim. It shows that you understand both sides of the argument.

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I hope that this helped. : )

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Part A: B

Part B: C

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In his talk, he shares that depression is often associated with middle-class phenomenon. But he looked for the symptoms of depression in people who are impoverished and have low incomes. It was found that depression can be traced in individuals who are impoverished. Poor people do not even get treatment for depression. So, he proved that depression is not a middle-class thing but most commonly found in impoverished people.

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