Answer:
Well I would characterize myslef as someone who's loyal and I say this because I am a good friend who is loyal and respectful to everyone's opinion and I am open to any and every perspective.
Explanation:
This is just me, you do you.:)
For a topic sentence, or the beginning sentence that signifies the main idea of the paragraph, you could focus on the fact that there are a variety of things to do at the beach (perhaps the 3rd sentence). To create a hook, or an eye-catching sentence, you can use the childhood memory of learning to swim, but perhaps in more detail. In other words, recreate the scene rather than just saying it was a happy memory (i.e. I'm five years old and am amazed by how weightless I feel in the water). Once you create the hook and topic sentence, you can talk about other activities at the beach as your supporting evidence.
Which book or excerpt is this from?
The highlighted sentence that also has a box around it is the making of a strong thesis statement
