Question

Hi my English teacher asked my class on zoom to write a poem about anything please can you tell me if my poem I good or bad just in case OK this is it:
Quarantine

Thinking, thinking all day my mind has been carried away,

I try to get my work done but all I can think about is fun,

But then there's a delay,

My work is over due,

So I work all day and work all night,

I know its bad for my eyesight,

But I can't get my time right,

But I might,

Try to get my work done for today.


If you want me to write anything for your work just message me. :)

Answer 1

Explanation:

i think in my opinion it's quite average. love the effort but try add some more interesting words to spice it up. try adding rhyming verses that would be amazing.

Answer 2

Answer:

this is actually really good

Explanation:

but it all depends on the level of english you are working on, if you are in a higher grade it might need slight improvement but its a really nice poem with good structure