The narrator’s mental health hinges not only on whether<span> she has work to do, but </span>what kind<span> of work it is. She wants to write and isn’t allowed, something that “</span>does<span> exhaust her a good deal” (3). The subtle undermining of her confidence as a writer doesn’t exactly help to repair the damaged relationships she shares with her husband and her sister-in-law, sending her further into a frenzy of paranoia that leads to her mounting obsession with the design of the paper on her bedroom wall.</span>
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Good annotations are specific, show the connections and evidence that's being used, and use your own words with clear meaning. Bad annotations are vague and minimal, are inserted at random so it "looks finished", and just try to get the "right answer".
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A semicolon continues the story. For example; I could have just stopped and said one setence but I continued on by putting a semicolon since there was more to tell.
C. do i have clear focus followed by relevant and intresting supporting details
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10- Oxymoron
The words "safety" and "hazard" are right by each other and those are complete opposites so that is an oxymoron.
11- alliteration
The use of the b's at the beginning of a lot of the words is alliteration because it is the repetition of a similar sound at the beginning of the word. The only other one that it could be is consonance because consonance also repeats a sound, but only consonants and it is usually at the end of the word. Even though b is a consonant, I don't think it is consonance because the repetition appears at the beginning of the word.
12- Anaphora
This is anaphora because the word "singing" is being repeated in most of the clauses in order to place emphasis on it.
