For the first red, you don't need an article before "relationship".
When you're saying "type of [word]", do not put any article before that word.
Example: "a type of device"
Not too sure about the "your back" parts. It could be your teacher does not like repition.
Also not too sure about "did". He probably wanted you to use the word "felt" instead of "did feel"
The first word of the last paragraph should be "in" not "at".
The red commas definitely do not need to be there.
Don't know why he marked "time to" and "to" red.
The tone is thoughtful while the mood is mysterious.
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To show that the narrator shares the fears of the characters in her story
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touch=scratchy wool trousers, freezing cold water, and cozy sleeping bag
sight= snow covered branches, bright red sparks, and glittering sidewalks.
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I have to do these things all of the time....hope this helps :)
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After deliberating for three hours and forty-three minutes, an all-white jury acquitted King of perjury for signing a false state income tax return. A news report indicated that King seemed “stunned” by the verdict, while his parents “collapsed in tears.” While outside the Montgomery courtroom, King delivers this statement to the press. This transcript was drawn from televison
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