You should add it all, just in fragments. For example (this is not relevant in any way, but:)
red capes, keep sun off skin.
Just keep it short and sweet, as long as you understand it who cares.
A. This intro sentence isn’t contributing to the body of the paragraph and doesn’t introduce the topic in a constructive manner, as should be done with all editorials. You must assume that the audience of your editorial doesn’t know anything about the topic you are going to convey.
B. life long love...........: )
Answer:
"Once we went to this carnival with rollercoasters and all sorts of fun attractions to see. It was our first time and we were very excited. We thought of taking our kids there all the time. We had a great time there. One of our best memeroies"
