Which statement is the best evaluation of this paragraph? The paragraph is sound but needs more supporting evidence to be comple
te. The paragraph does not have a topic sentence, so it is only partially complete. The paragraph needs to be completely revised, since it lacks focus and clarity. The paragraph is less effective after the first sentence because of its disconnected ideas.
Answer: The paragraph is sound but needs more supporting evidence to be complete.
Explanation:
The Paragraph is well ordered and concise. It is easy to understand and the ideas connect well. It even had a topic sentence that showed what the paragraph was about.
It is lacking in terms of supporting evidence though. It mentions by referencing Dr. Yuma Blankenshi, that a parent's behavior can influence a child's beliefs and value system but then does not go on to state how this is done so until that is stated and corroborated, the evidence is incomplete.
The behavior suggest that: He is willing to do anything to achieve his goals.
Gareth realized that someone with a background like him is almost impossible to enter knighthood. He took the job because he wanted to get Close to King Arthur and he eventually notices Gareth Value and potential.
Because no one has ever really seen it before and there is no evidence of there ever being a kind of creature in existence like the Loch Ness monster, which is supposedly a dinosaur-like swan/snake by it's description.
Oh! These are different because, one is about justice while on the other hand, 12 Angry Men is all about 12 white men who want to get a black boy killed.
