The last two didn't have any change. But most of this sounds good! I wouldn't mention you get angry at people to your employer, though!
If you need more help, private message me! I would be more than happy to help you with those irregular verbs! <3
Don't judge me because as far as I know I haven't let you borrow my shoes to walk in
Hope this Helps :)
The purpose is to get to know the character and to get u thinking about the plot
It all flows together smoothly and it makes sense and doesn’t jump from place to place without any context
