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Romashka-Z-Leto [24]
3 years ago
5

Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need

English
1 answer:
svp [43]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

Ashley wanted a puppy. One day, he talked to his family for hours. At first, they did not believe had the time to care for the puppy. Then, Ashley created a puppy-care plan. His family <u>finally</u> agreed.

Explanation:

Temporal (time) transitions are used to move the story forward and show the sequence of events. They indicate the frequency, duration, specific time, or beginning or end of something.

When used at the beginning of the sentence, transition words and phrases should be followed by a comma.

Bolded words are the temporal transitions that can be used to revise the given paragraph, while the underlined word <em>finally</em> is a temporal transition that had already been included.

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